Legal Writing
WEEK 4 - EDIT UNTIL IT HURTS
THE FINAL DRAFT CHECKLIST
PURPOSE
☐ Have I answered the question?
☐ Is my conclusion obvious?
☐ Do I know what I want the reader to do?
STRUCTURE
☐ Does the document have a logical sequence?
☐ Are the headings informative?
☐ Does every paragraph have a purpose?
ANALYSIS
☐ Have I explained the law rather than simply cited it?
☐ Have I applied the law to the facts?
☐ Have I dealt with the strongest counterargument?
CLARITY
☐ Is the subject of each sentence clear?
☐ Have I used active voice where appropriate?
☐ Have I eliminated unnecessary legalese?
☐ Are my sentences manageable?
CONCISION
☐ What can I delete?
☐ What can I combine?
☐ What can I say more simply?
AUTHORITY
☐ Does every authority actually support the proposition?
☐ Have I explained why the authority matters?
☐ Have I checked every citation?
FINAL TEST
☐ If someone reads only the headings, do they understand my argument?
☐ If someone reads only the first sentence of every paragraph, does the argument still work?
☐ Have I made the judge/partner/client's job easier?

